Rough Cut Feedback

The rough cuts of my magazine front cover, contents page and double page spread I produced were marked by my teacher and I was suggested to make the following specific improvements.

Front Cover

• White across top needs sorting out.
• Masthead needs to stand out more.
• Main sell line further down on a banner.
• Sell lines on sides.
• Include more images.

Contents Page

• Tag lines on photos to indicate stories.
• Page number.
• Back catalogue image on subscription information.
• Play with fonts.

Double Page Spread

• Banner across the top.
• Black background with white text.
• Break up text with a quote insert across article.
• Try polaroid images across bottom.